vanderweisman's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chamberlin (160bmp)]

You got zero bombed! :/ Simplicity is sometimes the best thing you can do. I like the bass patch. And the use of gross beat.

[Marre - Eel [House] [WIP]]

Sweet man, love the arps. And I also like that bass patch. My head was bobbing for most of the song.

Although, I find it might be a bit on the too repetitive side.

Lalalo14 responds:

Yeah I know it's reptitive, have to fix that! :)
Thanks man!

[My First REAL dubtep -Aaron C.]

Its there

but is really muddy, everything is around the same volume and its very hard to hear. I recommend spending more time on it.

Just a heads up, 3 hours is nothing in song production. Don't be scared to spend a whole week in a song.

MDArn responds:

I understand where you are coming from, however, I only have the DEMO vesion of FL studio 10, in which you cannot continue to edit projects after they are closed. The volume issue became apparent to me after I had already closed the project, because I was using high specifed headphones, and the panning was not as good on computer speakers.

I %100 agree with you, It was not a very good song, but It was a first attempt at an original song with completely oiginal tones from a beginner with music production. I DO need more practice and WILL make a better song eventually.

Thank you.

[-[LiveC]- Amorphous Techn]

Its good.

I gave you a nine because it sounds an awful lot like a song on here called "house party"
Thats it though. I like it.

inhstudios responds:

ic.. i got a bit of inspiration from that song, ill be honest, but i took the break down in a different direction, and transposed the key. ahhaah, this is back in the day, when i had no clue how to envelope a filter in FL.... and i just phased it. lmbo.
anyway, i still appreciate you listening man, and i appreciate the review as well.

[xKore - Starve]

Heard this on your soundcloud

Back when it was a shorter clip. I 've never heard anything like this.
Its unreal. I wanna see how this is done.

[Electro Tune]

Tempo too slow

Other than that I really like it! Maybe try a higher tempo?

[2+1 (WiP)]

Welcome to newgrounds!

Hey man, you should have told me you uploaded this. I was looking for a download.
I'll give it a 10 since its your very first song. And if you want some help on improving head over to the bbs and check out the review request club in the audio forums. Post a link, and people will come over and tell you what can be done to improve. I already gave you my 2 cents though. This is a good site, I think you'll like it here.

~Brad

[xKore - Interstate (FULL)]

Your Basses

Are phenomenal. It switched my focus on my techno, its that good.

Any tips for a newbie?