vanderweisman's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Marre - Eel [House] [WIP]]

Sweet man, love the arps. And I also like that bass patch. My head was bobbing for most of the song.

Although, I find it might be a bit on the too repetitive side.

Lalalo14 responds:

Yeah I know it's reptitive, have to fix that! :)
Thanks man!

[My First REAL dubtep -Aaron C.]

Its there

but is really muddy, everything is around the same volume and its very hard to hear. I recommend spending more time on it.

Just a heads up, 3 hours is nothing in song production. Don't be scared to spend a whole week in a song.

MDArn responds:

I understand where you are coming from, however, I only have the DEMO vesion of FL studio 10, in which you cannot continue to edit projects after they are closed. The volume issue became apparent to me after I had already closed the project, because I was using high specifed headphones, and the panning was not as good on computer speakers.

I %100 agree with you, It was not a very good song, but It was a first attempt at an original song with completely oiginal tones from a beginner with music production. I DO need more practice and WILL make a better song eventually.

Thank you.

[-[LiveC]- Amorphous Techn]

Its good.

I gave you a nine because it sounds an awful lot like a song on here called "house party"
Thats it though. I like it.

inhstudios responds:

ic.. i got a bit of inspiration from that song, ill be honest, but i took the break down in a different direction, and transposed the key. ahhaah, this is back in the day, when i had no clue how to envelope a filter in FL.... and i just phased it. lmbo.
anyway, i still appreciate you listening man, and i appreciate the review as well.

[Dj-Greene -Strobe. RMX]

It feels messy

After the intro it gets better, but when it starts the arps don't mix well with the song. Like I know they fit, but it just feels messy.

I hope you understand what I'm trying to say.

Chimy727 responds:

kind of...
but there arent really any arps.
a counter melody but I know what you mean!
thanks!
:D

[Techno Realms Reloaded]

I like this!

No idea, but wavin flag goes through my head when I hear this. But thats not a bad thing AT ALL.... This is one nice beat

thebigtarget1 responds:

Dude all the way! Just as long as its an epic flag! Thanks for the comment and i am glad that you enjoyed it!

[DJ Chaos- Nebula(BETA)]

Not bad

And so heres my opinion:

1. Find some samples of drum kits or use FPC as the stock sounds are crap.

2. Arpeggios don't exactly make a good song, they are great for progression but they shouldn't be the whole thing.

3. Your melodies are pretty good, I like the drums, which is one thing I'm terrible with. As far as bass goes, you could start simple and just use for note that follow your progression.

And to edit an uploaded song all you need to do is go to your account. (My account button at top right) and click on my audio submissions. There should be an edit button.

I look forward to hearing more of your work

Darkfire96 responds:

Wow Thanks. I Actually used a drum loop and used Fruity Slicer to open it.
I like arps, and i imagine a nebula to have an arp like sound. Well not completly, but this is wat my friend wanted. It took me about a year to figure out what makes a good melody. I understand what you're saying about bass, but im looking for good samples and Plugins to make one. I suck at basslines and i really wanted help. Thanks, but when i tried to edit a song it just kept the entire previous song. I wanted to upload another song without losing the reviews of the first song, and it keeps sayng i already uploaded something with the exact ID when i change the name. Thanks For the honest review! Also, i created the arp by scratch.
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

[deep electronic loop]

Not bad

It seems kinda jumbled...
Its a good listen but maybe only once or twice...
Maybe you should try to do simpler contrasting melodies... It takes a long time to contrast well. I know I can't

meinto responds:

Thanks for the review. Now I know where to start from. And how I should do it.