vanderweisman's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[~NK~ "Revolution"]

Low pass hurts my ears.

The low pass filter did provide a great effect on the speakers. But as soon as i tried it on my headphones it hurt, Other than that i love it

[DJ Ses ft. Armani OD - Someday (Produced By Adz Muzik)]

Profanity free

Just the way it should be. I find that this rap is better than most of the other rap out there.
Kinda reminds of K-OS just a little though.

[-Glorious morning-]

Sure this has been answered

First of all, this is an epic song. One of the best I've heard.

My question is, how do you get your sounds?

I don't think I'll get an answer -___-

[Dj-Greene -Strobe. RMX]

It feels messy

After the intro it gets better, but when it starts the arps don't mix well with the song. Like I know they fit, but it just feels messy.

I hope you understand what I'm trying to say.

Chimy727 responds:

kind of...
but there arent really any arps.
a counter melody but I know what you mean!
thanks!
:D

[Techno Realms Reloaded]

I like this!

No idea, but wavin flag goes through my head when I hear this. But thats not a bad thing AT ALL.... This is one nice beat

thebigtarget1 responds:

Dude all the way! Just as long as its an epic flag! Thanks for the comment and i am glad that you enjoyed it!

[DJ Chaos- Nebula(BETA)]

Not bad

And so heres my opinion:

1. Find some samples of drum kits or use FPC as the stock sounds are crap.

2. Arpeggios don't exactly make a good song, they are great for progression but they shouldn't be the whole thing.

3. Your melodies are pretty good, I like the drums, which is one thing I'm terrible with. As far as bass goes, you could start simple and just use for note that follow your progression.

And to edit an uploaded song all you need to do is go to your account. (My account button at top right) and click on my audio submissions. There should be an edit button.

I look forward to hearing more of your work

Darkfire96 responds:

Wow Thanks. I Actually used a drum loop and used Fruity Slicer to open it.
I like arps, and i imagine a nebula to have an arp like sound. Well not completly, but this is wat my friend wanted. It took me about a year to figure out what makes a good melody. I understand what you're saying about bass, but im looking for good samples and Plugins to make one. I suck at basslines and i really wanted help. Thanks, but when i tried to edit a song it just kept the entire previous song. I wanted to upload another song without losing the reviews of the first song, and it keeps sayng i already uploaded something with the exact ID when i change the name. Thanks For the honest review! Also, i created the arp by scratch.
Regards...

Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos

[Cytoplasm~]

Good!

Yes, it doesn't seem like an ambience but I say its a close to a genre that you can get...
its great, I have no issues. Love all the sounds man. maybe some channeling will help to keep it more ambient

[deep electronic loop]

Not bad

It seems kinda jumbled...
Its a good listen but maybe only once or twice...
Maybe you should try to do simpler contrasting melodies... It takes a long time to contrast well. I know I can't

meinto responds:

Thanks for the review. Now I know where to start from. And how I should do it.